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we were learning how to do punchy sentences like William Carlos Williams
I enjoyed writing the naughtiest thing I did.
I found is it hard to think of what I did naughty.
Kia ora Sarah, I don't like getting my hair caught in hair ties either. It really hurts when you try and get them out. Did anyone notice you had cut your hair? Did you cut much off? Did you get in trouble? Mā te wā, Mrs Naden
Salaam, my name is Ayana I am in Haumia class at Waikowhai Primary School. I like how you wrote it was so good to get the hair type out It reminds me of the time when my little sister hid somewhere in our house and when she cabe back some of her hair was missing. Maybe next time you could change the font so people can read it clearly If you want to see my blog, go to https://wpsayanar.blogspot.com/
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Kia ora Sarah,
ReplyDeleteI don't like getting my hair caught in hair ties either. It really hurts when you try and get them out. Did anyone notice you had cut your hair? Did you cut much off?
Did you get in trouble?
Mā te wā,
Mrs Naden
Salaam, my name is Ayana
ReplyDeleteI am in Haumia class at Waikowhai Primary School.
I like how you wrote it was so good to get the hair type out
It reminds me of the time when my little sister hid somewhere in our house and when she cabe back some of her hair was missing.
Maybe next time you could change the font so people can read it clearly
If you want to see my blog, go to https://wpsayanar.blogspot.com/